Since this was posted over a year ago, I don't know if you have a "final version" or not, but I like it completely except for the bells in the intro. That, to me, sounded kind of out of place. Have you heard the redbook version of Game12? It's on Descent for Playstation and MAC. Whatever instrument that is that plays the notes your bells play in this http://www.planetdescent.net/index.php?action=media;sa=item;in=873 9 seconds into it, that would be a good substitution.